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The Tainted

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A fantasy story following hunter Taya

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Comment from jim vecchio
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This chapter was a good compliment to the previous chapter. Whereas the previous one had lots of action, this concentrated on dialogue and strategy, which we will most likely read about in the near future.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
    You sure will!
reply by jim vecchio on 05-Jun-2024
    I'll look forward to it!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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So let's setup a multi-tier plan. We'll tie weapons to ourselves like Taya suggested. Then Dave will attack first. If he's able to make contact then Demi will kill it while it's distracted. If not, Brandy will douse it in oil and I'll throw the flare. Derek will act as spare muscle. As a last resort, if the mutant approaches Taya, she will blind it and whoever gets there first will kill it."

Quite in depth and thought out

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
    Thank you. I actually had a hard time with this one