Halloween Happening
Oh, dear!4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written Halloween in June poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great rhyming and descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This is a very cute and well written Halloween in June poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great rhyming and descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Teri.
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from Shanbreen
Quite a creative Cinquain poem. I don't quite know what meaning I should put to "Goo". =). The imagery is perfect. Best for the Halloween in June contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Quite a creative Cinquain poem. I don't quite know what meaning I should put to "Goo". =). The imagery is perfect. Best for the Halloween in June contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I think you have provided the homely and scary sides of Halloween, prepared the melon/cake and then have it explode, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Excellent, I think you have provided the homely and scary sides of Halloween, prepared the melon/cake and then have it explode, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you, kahot.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I really like your poem. I only have one problem with it. There's no indication that Halloween has come in June. I think the rules of the contest were to show that Halloween had come in June.
Your poem is upbeat with a surprise ending. Goo goo, I'm a baby. lol
See if you can find someway to incorporate something about June or summer into your poem. Or don't and take your chances
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I really like your poem. I only have one problem with it. There's no indication that Halloween has come in June. I think the rules of the contest were to show that Halloween had come in June.
Your poem is upbeat with a surprise ending. Goo goo, I'm a baby. lol
See if you can find someway to incorporate something about June or summer into your poem. Or don't and take your chances
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Hi Pam,
Thank you. You could be right, but the prompt only says to write about either the scary or homely side of Halloween, so I'm not sure. Quite a few of the entries don't allude to a June/early Halloween so I think I'll chance it. Thank you for taking the time. I appreciate it.