Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote.

I chose your poem because its simple and straightforward.

You didn't use gore word or artwork to explain Halloween.

The gates of hell open .

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

thanks a lot

reply by tempeste on 08-Jun-2024

A pleasure ! 🍀

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!

Your entry is the first to mention Halloween in your poem. I am struggling to understand why when it is supposed to be about Halloween that there is nothing in the poem mentioning Halloween

So I think you have a head start on them

I enjoyed your poem. Horror does not scare me unless I'm the victim.

I liked the last line

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024

thanks I had fun with this one

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

And isn't it lucky they're all in costume! I like the way you topped and tailed with a monster and the way you made the restricted line lengths work for you. Mayhem's one of those words that lifts a poem out of the ordinary, too.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024

thanks I had fun with this one