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By Then

a cinquain

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Comment from Aussie
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Halloween in June? Surely you jest. Loved the humor. Scary, no, homey, maybe. He sure would end up a skeleton by the time Halloween came around. Best wishes in the writing prompt.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Aussie
Comment from Sally Law
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This was scary in an indirect way, mystery poet. You made me think. It's early but I deduced the crime. Murder on Halloween! The poor dear! Now-- whodunnit? Staying tuned. Sending you my best today as always, and my good wishes for the cinquain contest.
Sally Law et al.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Sally
Comment from royowen
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Yes I think there is a question that repeats in my mind, if one loves Halloween will they be celebrating it for eternity, it's one of those myriad of questions floating around without an answer, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Roy
reply by royowen on 04-Jun-2024
    Pleasure
Comment from kahpot
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A skeleton, he will fit right in for this big occasion, here in AUS. Halloween is not overly celebrated, though some go all out, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from EeanBlack
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Awesome. I love Halloween. I'm older now so I just watch those scary movies on the tele. He should have a skeleton body now. There are so many different poem types. You poets are a different breed. I love the poem and it's subject.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you, EB
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!

This is delightfully written. I really like the ending. Original and imaginative all the way. You can be proud of this poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Pamusart
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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This is cute and clever. I know the small ones are hard to do. The deflated pumpkin looks good too ð???ð??? overall I enjoyed this quite a bit. Best of luck going forward.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Nicole
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Halloween in June writing prompt. The required criteria has been met. This was dark but in a fun way! lol Which is what all Halloween should be, in my opinion. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn