Too Early
Cinquain Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is fun! I like the first line and some neat rhyming in your cinquain which flows well. Presentation is perfect and this one ticks all the boxes for me. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is fun! I like the first line and some neat rhyming in your cinquain which flows well. Presentation is perfect and this one ticks all the boxes for me. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, it is early, I like your thought of rehearsing for Halloween, though not sur I want to encounter to many ghouls for that long, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, yes, it is early, I like your thought of rehearsing for Halloween, though not sur I want to encounter to many ghouls for that long, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I think yours is one of the best entries for the contest. I've seen many entries. Many have no mention of Halloween. Some have it in the title, but there are others that don't have it in the title or in the poem. I don't see how they can expect to win Halloween contest without mentioning the word Halloween somewhere. They could say all hallows, but some reference to Halloween.
I like the idea of spooks coming so soon
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I think yours is one of the best entries for the contest. I've seen many entries. Many have no mention of Halloween. Some have it in the title, but there are others that don't have it in the title or in the poem. I don't see how they can expect to win Halloween contest without mentioning the word Halloween somewhere. They could say all hallows, but some reference to Halloween.
I like the idea of spooks coming so soon
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This is a fun read overall from start to finish. In the small amount that you are allowed to use. The graphic fits perfectly here as well. All the best going forward with your work.
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This is a fun read overall from start to finish. In the small amount that you are allowed to use. The graphic fits perfectly here as well. All the best going forward with your work.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Too Early, has the proper formatting and acknowledges that the summertime is way too serene and pleasant to feed the anxious and fearful season.
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This cinquain, Too Early, has the proper formatting and acknowledges that the summertime is way too serene and pleasant to feed the anxious and fearful season.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A nice entry for the Halloween in June writing prompt. The required criteria for the poem was met. Extra credit for proper use of the word Gadzooks! good luck in the contest.
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A nice entry for the Halloween in June writing prompt. The required criteria for the poem was met. Extra credit for proper use of the word Gadzooks! good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024