Halloween's Number One Now
Is it a Surprise?4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
WHOA!!! You serious truth-teller, you!! Satan will never get his fiery red hands on YOUR spicy soul!!! Excellent poem with a most perfect photo for the finishing touch. xoxo
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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WHOA!!! You serious truth-teller, you!! Satan will never get his fiery red hands on YOUR spicy soul!!! Excellent poem with a most perfect photo for the finishing touch. xoxo
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Rach. I actually created the picture myself from numerous Google Image pictures. Who doesn't love a pic of a child in fire? Lol. Yep, it's a sad state the world's in anymore.
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I have a couple students like that one...
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Bummer.
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I'm a fiery redhead; I have my PhD in effectively handling little upstarts.
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Nice. Take 'em down. Lol
Comment from Sally Law
I must've missed this wonderful stab at Halloween. I hate it more with each passing year. My mother removed a razor blade from a Snickers bar one year and it hasn't been the same ever since. The devil's behind it all.
Sending you my best today as always, and my late congratulations.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I must've missed this wonderful stab at Halloween. I hate it more with each passing year. My mother removed a razor blade from a Snickers bar one year and it hasn't been the same ever since. The devil's behind it all.
Sending you my best today as always, and my late congratulations.
Sal :))
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Wow, a razor blade in a candy bar. Wow. Yes, I agree, it would never be the same after that. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sal. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
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Most welcome! :))
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Halloween, Number One Holiday, has the proper formatting and bemoans the supposed situation that the season based on evil touches more people than one based on God.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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This cinquain, Halloween, Number One Holiday, has the proper formatting and bemoans the supposed situation that the season based on evil touches more people than one based on God.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the review, Bill. Yep, it does.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry to the contest. Good luck with that.!
I know you are talking about Halloween. But, there is nothing in the poem that references Halloween. Maybe the committee will accept it. I hope so
I enjoyed your poem with the surprise at the end
Below. You know that this is wrong. But you could say
but now the child is taught.
"but now the children's taught"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry to the contest. Good luck with that.!
I know you are talking about Halloween. But, there is nothing in the poem that references Halloween. Maybe the committee will accept it. I hope so
I enjoyed your poem with the surprise at the end
Below. You know that this is wrong. But you could say
but now the child is taught.
"but now the children's taught"
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the great review, Pam. Seeing as how I titled it "Halloween, Number One Holiday" I would hope that the committee recognizes it as a Halloween piece. I didn't really want just one child as the subject of this so that's why I went with but now the children's taught. I really couldn't figure out how to shorten it. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, Pam. Thank you again.
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I fixed it. Thanks for pointing out my goof.
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You fixed it just fine
