The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Meet the Team"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
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Comment from jim vecchio
Your tale continues to engross the reader. You have chosen a very appropriate length, since some reviewers won't read very long stories. Also you know the exact point to leave off to keep us wondering till the next installment.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Your tale continues to engross the reader. You have chosen a very appropriate length, since some reviewers won't read very long stories. Also you know the exact point to leave off to keep us wondering till the next installment.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Yes! I struggled a bit dividing it so I'm glad it works
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It worked just fine!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
After about an hour of walking we came across four people sprawled around a fire. The entrance to the village was visible but far enough away that it was unlikely we'd run into the tainted we were hunting. There were three men and one woman.
I like how involved this is. Good overall.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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After about an hour of walking we came across four people sprawled around a fire. The entrance to the village was visible but far enough away that it was unlikely we'd run into the tainted we were hunting. There were three men and one woman.
I like how involved this is. Good overall.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you