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My thoughts boiled and churned.

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Comment from kahpot
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Hello, Ricky, have not heard from you for some time, hope all is well, very well written, and yes, a bit early for Halloween but frightening all the same, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thanks kahpot and have a pleasant day.
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reply by kahpot on 04-Jun-2024
    Hope you are well
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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Extremed in Nightmare screams as she awaits.
She's anxious and full of hate.
Light-Yellowed Brown nails of claw
Speak and seek.
Reddened eyes of Green peaks..

I am loving the imagery here!!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
    Thanks again and Halloween tis just a scare away!
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