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My thoughts boiled and churned.
2 total reviews
Comment from
kahpot
Hello, Ricky, have not heard from you for some time, hope all is well, very well written, and yes, a bit early for Halloween but frightening all the same, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
Thanks kahpot and have a pleasant day.
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reply by kahpot on 04-Jun-2024
Comment from
Nicole Schmidt
Extremed in Nightmare screams as she awaits.
She's anxious and full of hate.
Light-Yellowed Brown nails of claw
Speak and seek.
Reddened eyes of Green peaks..
I am loving the imagery here!!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
Thanks again and Halloween tis just a scare away!
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