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Achievement At All Costs

The need to win

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Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu
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What a shock! I was not expecting this. What a misfortune to have befallen poor Robert. Looking back at your title and the observation of Gina's Scotch being replaced on the table, untouched, the clues were there. Well done :-)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This is going too far for a job which she will lose when she goes to jail for murder.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word story, Achievement at All Costs, has the proper word count and allows us the witness Gina's winning move and Robert's poor decision-making.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Now that's a way of winning, I guess. Take out the opponent and you have no one to stop your climb. Great story in so few words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

Comment from Dr. Nad
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Thank you so much for your story concerning Robert and Gina. I hope Gina enjoys her new position, I would just like to remind her that she needs to keep her eyes open. Lol good job And good luck in Disc contest.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024

Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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"Gina, no matter who wins, I respect you and will support you if you should win."

I love the sentiment behind us. Good work and good luck going forward from here.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024