Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Poor Ralph. I wonder why his grandmother would make such a stipulation. I would think that if he would be required to have a son, then his being grandson wasn't special enough. Interesting plot in your hundred word story.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!

Yeah it's kind of strange that Sue couldn't inherit.For the grandson , I wonder if it was Julie or he who can't conceive. If it is he then there is. nothing to be done. But. If he is fertile. There would be the possibility of a surrogate mom giving him a son.

Good story. I enjoyed it and saw no errors

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Heh heh, obviously Jameson was going to fulfil the requirement of the will, just how much he was to receive perhaps might be in question, but at least his lust would be. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024

Great review zanya