Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Wow! Look before you leap is a saying I had always heard growing up. I always thought cutting off the offending appendage was a good solution myself. If that was the standard treatment I think it would narrow down the list of offenders. :-) Karen

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024

Thanks. I?ll try not to get on your wrong side! Cheers.

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 05-Jun-2024

Good writing. Karen

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word story, Justice, has the proper word count and finds that when one sets out for vengeance he must dig two graves. One for each. .........

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024

Thank you, Bill.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Wow... there's more than one tragedy wrapped up in those one hundred words. A great job of moving the reader. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024

Thanks, BA. You too.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness this is a bloody post full of vengeful stabs of the knife and I found it quite shocking to read. Perhaps a warning might be prudent. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024

Thanks, Dolly.

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Wielding the carving knife, Joseph lunged at the shadow behind the fragile screen.

The young face, exposed, screamed and gushed blood.

A trainee priest!

"Father Burns, help me!"


This is quite strong overall

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024

Thank you.