Rainstorm Memory
When love was new.5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Rainstorm Memory, has the proper word count and takes the readers into Jack's memory that seems upbeat until it is not. ...........
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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This one-hundred-word story, Rainstorm Memory, has the proper word count and takes the readers into Jack's memory that seems upbeat until it is not. ...........
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 100 Word dash you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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This is a very well written 100 Word dash you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the read and review.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Begin Again
Life has a way of stirring up memories when we least expect it and the rain brought a lot of doom and gloom back to Jack's door step. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Life has a way of stirring up memories when we least expect it and the rain brought a lot of doom and gloom back to Jack's door step. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from jessizero
This story was captivating, but it was heartbreaking. You did a great job, as is evidenced by the feeling you gave the reader. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This story was captivating, but it was heartbreaking. You did a great job, as is evidenced by the feeling you gave the reader. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Scarbrems
A lovely little story. Your use of the rain as a backdrop was very effective in creating the mood/atmosphere of the piece, triggering a happy memory that brought the tears of lost love.
This may be an American difference, ignore me if so, but the past tense of 'spit' is 'spat' in British English, so that stood out as an error for me, but as I said, appreciate it might not be the case in American English.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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A lovely little story. Your use of the rain as a backdrop was very effective in creating the mood/atmosphere of the piece, triggering a happy memory that brought the tears of lost love.
This may be an American difference, ignore me if so, but the past tense of 'spit' is 'spat' in British English, so that stood out as an error for me, but as I said, appreciate it might not be the case in American English.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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You are correct, spat is the past tense in American English also. I have edited. Thanks for the catch.
