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The Vampire

Harold is a vampire out for blood.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word story, The Vampire, has the proper word count and seems to reduce the horror and fear of the demonic vampire to that of a panhandler. I guess that makes Stacy the Salvation Army.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024


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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Well, it sounds like poor, polite Harold finally gets a volunteer. We don't know much about Stacy, or why she offers, but you can't account for people sometimes... Maybe she had just had a really bad day.

Take care, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024


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Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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I'm curious my Stacy allows him to do that. I'm sure it would be quite frustrating to try and find someone because he was really willing to do that?

I enjoyed the graphic that went with this. All the best going forward with yourwork

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024


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    Thank you!