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True Blue

Roses are... sometimes blue.

28 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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The beauty of God is manifest in a child, I have been privileged to witness that beauty in my children and my grandchildren but that rare blue rose is a special colour indeed, and I'm not sure I've ever seen a blue rove, well done Jamison, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    I learned a lot about roses from this story. A blue rose can't be found in nature; roses don't have the gene to produce that color. However, you can dye a white rose blue, sort of. The eye condition is real but rare. Thanks, Roy. Take care! - Jamison
reply by royowen on 16-Jun-2024
    Thank you Jamison,
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I liked this little piece a lot.

A lot of what we experience and feel comes down to perspective and Maddy here demonstrates this in such a lovely, kind way.

Well written piece with good pacing.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Many thanks, G. Take care. - Jamison
Comment from Sally Law
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I missed this! Aw, congratulations on another fine flash fiction. This was really sweet and something I have in the last stages of my retinitis pigmentosa. Blue and purple look the same sometimes.
Again, congrats on your win! Awesome!
Sal :))

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Thanks, my good friend! I thought of you when researching this condition and wondered if there were similarities. I'm sending you a blue rose today (virtually) and many prayers. Take care. - Jamison
reply by Sally Law on 12-Jun-2024
    Thank you, my friend! You're so kind! .Sal :))
Comment from jenintorre
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Congratulations on your win. It is very well deserved. This is a very heart warming story about color blindness, I really enjoyed reading it. Take care. Jen.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Hi Jen. I so appreciate your kind words. Thank you. - Jamison
Comment from prettybluebirds
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I can understand why this story won the contest. It is lovely and heart-touching. I love the picture of the two little girls; it reminds me of the girl who was my best friend in childhood. Superb writing.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Thank you, pbb. I truly appreciate these six stars. Your kind words are inspiring; I will remember them. Take care. - Jamison
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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What a heartwarming story this is! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and appreciated the kernel of information in the Author's Notes about the condition Protanopia.

This was a beautiful story of friendship of the best kind, indeed: true blue. So glad it won first place for you.

xoxoxo

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Hi Rachelle. This story is one of my favorites. Thank you for reading it and for the great review. Have a great week and take care. - Jamison
reply by Rachelle Allen on 09-Jun-2024
    The same to you, Jamison. xo
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a very nice story which I see is a winner. It is good when one can take a handicap and see it in the light that makes it beautiful. This condition would be really inconvenient in many ways but being explained in this way make it a rare gift.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    I appreciate your kind review, Beth. Indeed, we are all special, even if we aren't perfect. Thank you, and take care. - Jamison
Comment from zaraduck6
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This was a wonderful flash fiction story! The role of the blue rose was very clear and amazing. I love the characters and the story line. Well done! And congrats on the contest winner! This story truly deserved that.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Hi Zara. Thank you for this great review. Your kind words are much appreciated and inspiring. It's especially nice to have a new friend here on FanStory. Take care. - Jamison
Comment from Sharon Elwell
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You definitely met the brief on this one - and taught us something at the same time. I've always wondered how people who see colors differently know that their perception is different. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Sharon. I appreciate your six stars! The eye disease is rare, and so is true friendship. Take care. - Jamison
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An endearing story of true friendship here Jamison and I enjoyed the read, congratulations on your win here, an entertaining tale, love Dolly x x x x x x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Thanks, Dolly. It's a better world with friendship. Take care. - Jamison