I Wake Up in June
a 5-7-511 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-A good opening line, followed by
the dawning of a new day, with
effective use of alliteration.
-A very good concluding line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Bill.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-A good opening line, followed by
the dawning of a new day, with
effective use of alliteration.
-A very good concluding line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from kahpot
Love your chosen artwork, yes, and another month is upon us, and with it comes the cold, I remember last year, the only time I saw the sun was when I googled it, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Love your chosen artwork, yes, and another month is upon us, and with it comes the cold, I remember last year, the only time I saw the sun was when I googled it, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, we close our eyes and suddenly it's another month like that! But we thank the Lord that we still woke up and have another day to praise Him. Thanks for the fun poem!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Yes, we close our eyes and suddenly it's another month like that! But we thank the Lord that we still woke up and have another day to praise Him. Thanks for the fun poem!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Helen
Comment from nomi338
Yes June is the wake up, get up and do something month. May was a kind of sleepy month for me, but June, oh boy. I am prepared to really do something now. When July and August come around, I will probably just be content to sizzle.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Yes June is the wake up, get up and do something month. May was a kind of sleepy month for me, but June, oh boy. I am prepared to really do something now. When July and August come around, I will probably just be content to sizzle.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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July and August must be months in the year, right?
Comment from jim vecchio
The image you chose alone is worth the stars! I didn't sleep last night, so my eyes knew I was awake. But, at our age, it's great to be blessed with another day of life!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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The image you chose alone is worth the stars! I didn't sleep last night, so my eyes knew I was awake. But, at our age, it's great to be blessed with another day of life!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Eyes open ? good start.
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They stayed open.
Comment from Ulla
You sound as if you're surprised. Yes time passes much quicker than we any of us would like and now it is just almost half the way through the year! Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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You sound as if you're surprised. Yes time passes much quicker than we any of us would like and now it is just almost half the way through the year! Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Waking is the first miracle.
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Absolutely! Hehe.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very nice 5-7-5 poem. This is how I perceive time as it moves during the winter season. I wake up around June when the summer days start heating up and adding a brightness to the landscape. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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A very nice 5-7-5 poem. This is how I perceive time as it moves during the winter season. I wake up around June when the summer days start heating up and adding a brightness to the landscape. Nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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I was wondering where May went.
Comment from Jill D
As my dad would say "every day's a good day when you wake up" ...Especially when the sun is shining. I like the image you chose it's perfect!
All the best Bill.
Jill:)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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As my dad would say "every day's a good day when you wake up" ...Especially when the sun is shining. I like the image you chose it's perfect!
All the best Bill.
Jill:)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Jill
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I love the graphic that you used, it feels like it fits here perfectly. Great job of word usage in the confines of this type of poem. Best of luck going forward
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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I love the graphic that you used, it feels like it fits here perfectly. Great job of word usage in the confines of this type of poem. Best of luck going forward
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole
Comment from BethShelby
This is another nice 5-7-5 poem with a lovely summer picture. It is hard to realize we are almost at the half way point. All the years lately seem to be flying by at warp speed.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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This is another nice 5-7-5 poem with a lovely summer picture. It is hard to realize we are almost at the half way point. All the years lately seem to be flying by at warp speed.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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I was going to entitle this I Wake Up in May but that was history