The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from karenina
"That's the true meaning of redemption, the journey to make amends and find peace."
Yes, Carol ~ you have imbued every character, each dialogue, and scene with this most important message.
The "treasure" is revealing the truth, having the opportunity to "run the visions of the past" (very clever by the way) -- for those who need to understand -- and embrace the merging of what was with what can be.
This chapter makes me feel very emotional. I wish I'd had the chance to do this with my family's "spirits."
I defy anyone to read this book and not become enthralled!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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"That's the true meaning of redemption, the journey to make amends and find peace."
Yes, Carol ~ you have imbued every character, each dialogue, and scene with this most important message.
The "treasure" is revealing the truth, having the opportunity to "run the visions of the past" (very clever by the way) -- for those who need to understand -- and embrace the merging of what was with what can be.
This chapter makes me feel very emotional. I wish I'd had the chance to do this with my family's "spirits."
I defy anyone to read this book and not become enthralled!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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This story turned into much more than a ghost story or a mystery as I wrote it. I could feel so differently, working through things myself, as I thought out each chapter. I love my characters and want only the best for them in the end. Of course, being me, I have to put them through a lot of drama before they reach their goal. Thank you so much for all your kindness and for reading the story.
Love you and tons of hugs, Carol
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It's hard being behind...but on the other hand I'm excited to see what you've been writing two or three chapters at a time! Now if only supper would cook itself, I could go read another! (Smile)
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Too bad I don't have it on one of those talking books. You could cook and listen. Love ya, Carol
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Cook? Oh well. grilled hot dogs and macaroni salad. That's as good as it's getting here tonight! (It's still 93 degrees!)
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It's 89 right now. It was hotter but a quick storm is blowing through and the temp is dropping with it. Hurrah!
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I swear, I wait all winter for Spring and Summer...then Summer gets here, and I start pining for fall. I like 75-80 with a breeze. I hear it's like that in Hawaii! (as if....)
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Exactly what I want...;love the breezes and sitting by the ocean. Heaven!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I'm trying to catch up with all the writing I have missed during the last ten days or so. I loved this chapter and it will help.me reading what comes next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Hi Carol, I'm trying to catch up with all the writing I have missed during the last ten days or so. I loved this chapter and it will help.me reading what comes next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Ulla. I appreciate your efforts and kind words when you read and enjoy my story. I know it takes a lot of time and I am thrilled when the reader fins enjoyment in my work. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely chapter. It had everything in it, love, sadness for the time missed, hope and joy. Now Billy has seen what happened. It's nice that Esther and Madeline are now friends. Lovely, lovely chapter!! Onwards! Xxxxx
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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What a lovely chapter. It had everything in it, love, sadness for the time missed, hope and joy. Now Billy has seen what happened. It's nice that Esther and Madeline are now friends. Lovely, lovely chapter!! Onwards! Xxxxx
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Oh Wow! I am blessed beyond words. Not only are you taking time from your vacation to read my story, but you are kindly awarding me those precious stars. You're the best. I'm thrilled that you felt the emotions between Esther and Madeline. thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Marvelous writing. You guarantee the reader, in this case, me, will continue with the story. Each chapter ends with the reader wondering what's next. Nice work.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Marvelous writing. You guarantee the reader, in this case, me, will continue with the story. Each chapter ends with the reader wondering what's next. Nice work.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Hello, April... As long as I can keep you curious as to what will happen next, I am thrilled. I thank you for enjoying my work.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
So neatly caught in your trap. I very much enjoy this story. I must read again from the beginning without stopping to think about reviews and just read. It is that good! Esther
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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So neatly caught in your trap. I very much enjoy this story. I must read again from the beginning without stopping to think about reviews and just read. It is that good! Esther
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Oh, Esther, I feel so blessed by your comments. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story and my humble efforts. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
The plot thickens as ghostly family members come together and understand more about their history and relationships. I'm glad both Madeline and Esther have found much needed friendship, even though one is mortal and one a ghost. I marvel as your vivid imagination, but am enjoying your creativity.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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The plot thickens as ghostly family members come together and understand more about their history and relationships. I'm glad both Madeline and Esther have found much needed friendship, even though one is mortal and one a ghost. I marvel as your vivid imagination, but am enjoying your creativity.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Hello, dear friend...Glad to see you today. I too like the relationship between Madeline and Esther.... funny how that developed. Now who do you think is behind the bushes...the good guys or the bad? And what do they want?
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I can't imagine how you came up with all of this. You've given me a whole new perspective on why ghosts might exist and why poeple might have NDE's I now it is ficfion but it would explain a lot. I'd hate to think there are ghosts arround everwhere hoping to atone and move on. Cool story.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I can't imagine how you came up with all of this. You've given me a whole new perspective on why ghosts might exist and why poeple might have NDE's I now it is ficfion but it would explain a lot. I'd hate to think there are ghosts arround everwhere hoping to atone and move on. Cool story.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I never would have given it much thought until the day my mother was hospitalized for her cancer and I was told she was dying. My daughter appeared (which I have a picture) and I didn't understand how I could see her. Someone said to me that she was making amends between her and me by being there for her grandmother. Don't know if it was true or not, but it definitely made a lasting impression on me. Thanks so much, Beth.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
This was a very moving chapter, both the scene with Billy, his father and grandfather and also Esther and Madeline in the garden. Truths are coming out, and they are all realising the importance of truth and love, and spiritual redemption, rather than just finding an earthly treasure.well written, so imaginative. I see also some aspects of your yearning for your own family's redemption and transformation.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This was a very moving chapter, both the scene with Billy, his father and grandfather and also Esther and Madeline in the garden. Truths are coming out, and they are all realising the importance of truth and love, and spiritual redemption, rather than just finding an earthly treasure.well written, so imaginative. I see also some aspects of your yearning for your own family's redemption and transformation.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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You see right through me, Wendy. One can hope for better tomorrows but ..... I appreciate that my efforts in the story touched you and you could sense the emotions playing out, even if they are ghosts. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that Billy got to learn more about his history and have that good reunion.
Madeline has really changed personality here - showing a very kind side of her and perhaps Esther has brought that out of her. We know that no one is good but all are saved by God's grace alone. I guess that Esther and Madeline will find that out soon.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I'm glad that Billy got to learn more about his history and have that good reunion.
Madeline has really changed personality here - showing a very kind side of her and perhaps Esther has brought that out of her. We know that no one is good but all are saved by God's grace alone. I guess that Esther and Madeline will find that out soon.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I think Madeline needed a true friend, ghost or not, and she discovered what that meant and is following through. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, Helen.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely chapter as Esther meets her son and grandson. She seems to have been as good a person as possible most of her life, I can't imagine what is threatening her at the end, although she seems to expect it.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This is a lovely chapter as Esther meets her son and grandson. She seems to have been as good a person as possible most of her life, I can't imagine what is threatening her at the end, although she seems to expect it.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Hello, Carol...Thanks for stopping by to read my story and to still be enjoying it. I appreciate your support and thoughtfulness.
Smiles, Carol