Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

Pennies at night are a shing and the full Moon:s ago (Moon's????)

The Meadows are Mellow and thr Mountains Majestic. (the)

And, All God's children below are protected. (omit the comma)

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024

Thanks for the Grammar and have a great morning.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

This is strong with emotion and the sentiment is loud and clear. Very nice work overall!!

"The Meadows are Mellow and thr Mountains Majestic."

All I would say is fix the typo here!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024

Thanks for reading and editing.
Doctor Ricky