2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Ulla
Hola Marival, I can so identify with your words in this Gogyohka poem. A Japanese form I still have to learn about. I'm fascinated by it, and I loved the presentation. Besitos y un abrazo, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Hola Marival, I can so identify with your words in this Gogyohka poem. A Japanese form I still have to learn about. I'm fascinated by it, and I loved the presentation. Besitos y un abrazo, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Ulla. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
besitos y abrazos
Comment from barbara.wilkey
If we could all flow like a creek life would be much better. With God's guiding our way we can be, but unfortunately, our humanness gets in the way. I enjoyed reading and the entire presentation. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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If we could all flow like a creek life would be much better. With God's guiding our way we can be, but unfortunately, our humanness gets in the way. I enjoyed reading and the entire presentation. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Go with the flow but remember who you are. Sometimes we lose a part of ourselves when we go with the flow. Lol. This was a really cool poem about being comfortable with yourself. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Go with the flow but remember who you are. Sometimes we lose a part of ourselves when we go with the flow. Lol. This was a really cool poem about being comfortable with yourself. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
great imagery with great advice
smooth flow with nice alliteration of the 'f' and 'k' sounds
cool dripping gold, too
nice! thank you for sharing! shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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great imagery with great advice
smooth flow with nice alliteration of the 'f' and 'k' sounds
cool dripping gold, too
nice! thank you for sharing! shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and helpful feedback.
Gypsy
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and to me, the ability to think and reason has gone astray and has led us to the dark place society finds ourselves in. it's hard to understand
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and to me, the ability to think and reason has gone astray and has led us to the dark place society finds ourselves in. it's hard to understand
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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I can't believe how disillusioned trump is. So many ridiculous lies. He doesn't make sense, more than usual. You can tell he is freaking out and losing touch with reality. I'm hoping a good portion of his supporters are intelligent enough to not vote for him. Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
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I think most are, it's the Three Teeth Army that I'm worried about, thanks, Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
I really like your message of how to achieve happiness, we do need to learn how to just shrug some things off, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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I really like your message of how to achieve happiness, we do need to learn how to just shrug some things off, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that's the great thing about rivers and creeks - and water, in general. They do "go with the flow." We humans fuss about everything and worry about the future.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Yes, that's the great thing about rivers and creeks - and water, in general. They do "go with the flow." We humans fuss about everything and worry about the future.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. How is your weekend going?
Love,
Marival
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Gypsy. I remember a creek in which I and my siblings would play. It was very rocky and there were rattlesnakes hiding in those rocks. When I went back years later, it was gone. Just rocks. No water. I used to love hearing the rush of water in my creek. One day I followed it to where it met the ocean. Just a trickle by then.
You are giving good advice. Just go with the flow
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Hi, Gypsy. I remember a creek in which I and my siblings would play. It was very rocky and there were rattlesnakes hiding in those rocks. When I went back years later, it was gone. Just rocks. No water. I used to love hearing the rush of water in my creek. One day I followed it to where it met the ocean. Just a trickle by then.
You are giving good advice. Just go with the flow
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I enjoy this and it's progression as it goes. It flows along perfectly. The graphic and color scheme also fit very nicely. It's very important to go with the flow.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I enjoy this and it's progression as it goes. It flows along perfectly. The graphic and color scheme also fit very nicely. It's very important to go with the flow.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well it does indeed go with the flow. I think this is the second or third one I have read of its kind.
You have expressed it well and this is based on my limited knowledge of Gogyohka poetry. But I am learning and liking what I see.
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Well it does indeed go with the flow. I think this is the second or third one I have read of its kind.
You have expressed it well and this is based on my limited knowledge of Gogyohka poetry. But I am learning and liking what I see.
RJ
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy