2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal.
This wonderful haiku reminds us that nature is a gift given to us by God.
It is all new almost every day.
Keep writing and say healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of the weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Hi MariVal.
This wonderful haiku reminds us that nature is a gift given to us by God.
It is all new almost every day.
Keep writing and say healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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You're very welcome, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from shelley kaye
love the satori!
and the comparison between saplings and fawns playing is intriguing
cute pic of bambi mooning someone, too lol
great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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love the satori!
and the comparison between saplings and fawns playing is intriguing
cute pic of bambi mooning someone, too lol
great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful contest entry with us. In my area those cute little deer will eat those saplings. We have to fence all the trees we plant until they get big enough the deer won't kill them. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful contest entry with us. In my area those cute little deer will eat those saplings. We have to fence all the trees we plant until they get big enough the deer won't kill them. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a beautiful poem. You even presented it in a mesmerizing way. The fact that you said it's God's work in progress spoke volumes of how you view the world. You see it as ever evolving. Changing day to day. A beautiful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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This was a beautiful poem. You even presented it in a mesmerizing way. The fact that you said it's God's work in progress spoke volumes of how you view the world. You see it as ever evolving. Changing day to day. A beautiful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Yes, God has created and given so much, with all of nature and its critters, I just hope man is bright enough to look after it, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Yes, God has created and given so much, with all of nature and its critters, I just hope man is bright enough to look after it, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, and the amazing creatures He made even us imperfect humans are all "works in progress". He never gives up on us and helps us each step of the way. Lovely thought and presentation!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Yes, and the amazing creatures He made even us imperfect humans are all "works in progress". He never gives up on us and helps us each step of the way. Lovely thought and presentation!
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I knew you would understand.
Love
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very beautiful and well illustrated and expressed with truthful words.
Thanks for sharing. I alway find your colors to be rich and clearly depicted.
Have a great evening.
God bless,
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Very beautiful and well illustrated and expressed with truthful words.
Thanks for sharing. I alway find your colors to be rich and clearly depicted.
Have a great evening.
God bless,
RJ
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Good night (*÷*)
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You're always welcome
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I absolutely adore this. The graphics fit absolutely perfectly here. You did an awesome job of wording in a short poem! Best of luck going forward. God's work in progress, indeed.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I absolutely adore this. The graphics fit absolutely perfectly here. You did an awesome job of wording in a short poem! Best of luck going forward. God's work in progress, indeed.
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicole, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, creation moves and lives in us and with and moves us, just as He does with us, without God we couldn't exist, if he turned His back, we would cease to exist, not that He would, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Oh yes, creation moves and lives in us and with and moves us, just as He does with us, without God we couldn't exist, if he turned His back, we would cease to exist, not that He would, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy