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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from shelley kaye
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LOL!!

unsure the significance of the big juicy cheeseburger
but i this was a great kyoka for a happy day that justice can prevail lol
humourously thought-provoking with smooth flow

thank you for sharing - and the morning giggle hehe

shelley :)

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    gold toilets, orange hair, tiny hands, and burgers are all things trump likes... it's a way to write about him without spelling his name. Most people who know about him know what those things relate to. I am happy it made you laugh, the kind of poem calls for satire and humor 😊😁

    Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
reply by shelley kaye on 01-Jun-2024
    ahh okay - did not know about the cheeseburger!
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Interesting perspective and well crafted words. As a person of color, I dare to say he is really felon number two.
If I am getting you correctly,
I would tell you the worse is yet to come under a man whose witts play according to time and circumstance.
Lol.
RJ

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    LoL yes, Trump is a horrible human being and ex-president. I pray Biden will win. If Trump wins I am moving to Canada. hehe It's about time he is held responsible for his actions

    Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your review and kind words.

    Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, that is about the only throne that man deserves, this so very well done, and so humorous, I cannot believe he is still able to run for the top job, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much, kym. I can't believe it either. :/

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Your poem tells me exactly who that man is without ever saying his name. The part that bothers me the most is that his party still supports him as their candidate. They should be so ashamed of themselves!
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    yes, I agree with you... it's unbelievable

    thank you very much, big sister,

    love,

    marival
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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Oh my gosh!! I absolutely loved this and couldn't help but laugh! The graphic fits perfectly too! I'm sure if he could have a golden toilet he would! Haha.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    haha... yes, I thought he would take his golden toilet with him LoL

    thank you very much, Nicole, have a great weekend

    gypsy