Comment from SimianSavant

Excellent

I just discovered this gem of yours and laughed my ass off. The fairly dry buildup made the ending all that funnier. And what a perfect contest idea. This is giving me wicked ideas for a new series of maudlin contests.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024

Lol. Thank you for the great review, friend. Yeah, you know me, I couldn't just enter something lame. Haha. Giving some thought to your contest. Still trying to come up with something for the Stalker contest. I'm glad you had a laugh at this ridiculous piece.

Ron

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!

This is so cute in a way. The ending makes them bad fairies. What made you decide to end it that way? And what made you decide that the fairies were on cocaine? That was funny

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024

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reply by the author on 31-May-2024

Thank you for the great review, Pam. I just had to go a different direction than everyone else would surely go for a contest like this. That and just to have a chuckle along the way, knowing most people on here will hate it. Lol I'm glad you liked this silliness. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This story started out fun and innocent, but quickly grew dark. That was a shocker of an ending! You did a great job of telling the story. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024

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reply by the author on 31-May-2024

Thank you for the review, Jessi. Yeah, I couldn't just go with the happy, pretty stuff every other entry is going to offer. Lol. Have yourself a great weekend.