Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"Love's first dance, a whispered waltz," love this line, it draws the poem together as one can imagine the words and touch between the two people, beautifully written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you with all good things. Patric.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

I enjoy the emotion behind this and I believe that the graphic fits very well too. There is good imagery here. I wish you luck moving forward with your work

 Comment Written 31-May-2024

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. "As stars applaud" was a wonderful, inventive line. The two poems complemented each other perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Mystery poet, this is a lovely sedoka poem. The best I have read so far and very romantic. You'll do very well with this charmer.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 30-May-2024