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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a wonderful poem. Full of rich descriptions and the way you described the blades of wheat, took my breath away. You then brought it back around to show that Jesus loves everything, from the magnificent sky to the tiniest grains of sand. We all matter. Beautifully done. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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This was a wonderful poem. Full of rich descriptions and the way you described the blades of wheat, took my breath away. You then brought it back around to show that Jesus loves everything, from the magnificent sky to the tiniest grains of sand. We all matter. Beautifully done. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
cool love poem!
excellent imagery
smell is a powerful sense...
a couple things i noticed -
first stanza you started with "i'm in love" - the other stanzas are "i am in love" - maybe make them the same refrain?
the last stanza ended with "AND he is in love" - maybe delete the 'and'?
so it's i am in love and he is in love?
eh just a could thoughts for you to kick around...
great free verse!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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cool love poem!
excellent imagery
smell is a powerful sense...
a couple things i noticed -
first stanza you started with "i'm in love" - the other stanzas are "i am in love" - maybe make them the same refrain?
the last stanza ended with "AND he is in love" - maybe delete the 'and'?
so it's i am in love and he is in love?
eh just a could thoughts for you to kick around...
great free verse!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you! I fixed it.
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
There are many things in nature that draws us into deep love and appreciation.Your words are strong and descriptive. I especially like the fact see your ability to feel all this love because of the love of Christ for you.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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There are many things in nature that draws us into deep love and appreciation.Your words are strong and descriptive. I especially like the fact see your ability to feel all this love because of the love of Christ for you.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing the great love that Christ has for His Church and all of His Creatures. I like how you always capture the sights and sounds and even the smells like in "touching the golden altar infused with frankincense"
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thanks for sharing the great love that Christ has for His Church and all of His Creatures. I like how you always capture the sights and sounds and even the smells like in "touching the golden altar infused with frankincense"
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you very much, sister.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from royowen
Where love exists, there indeed does God live, if we hide ourself in God, we are immune to the ways of chaos, we will live in peace and contentment, there is peace, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Where love exists, there indeed does God live, if we hide ourself in God, we are immune to the ways of chaos, we will live in peace and contentment, there is peace, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy
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Pleasure