The Fix
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Fix - Chapter Eleven"A mother fights to prove her son's innocence
10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Reporters think they can do what they like to get a story. I feel so sorry for people who have to go through this sort of thing. To have her own daughter tell her to move on with her life, must make Stacey feel so alone. Off to read another chapter. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Reporters think they can do what they like to get a story. I feel so sorry for people who have to go through this sort of thing. To have her own daughter tell her to move on with her life, must make Stacey feel so alone. Off to read another chapter. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2024
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Thank you Sandra, I really appreciate you taking the time to go back and read.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
The press has a bad habit of sticking its nose where it's not wanted and doesn't belong. This is crazy to me. As a parent I would be livid.
Good story overall I kept my attention well.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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The press has a bad habit of sticking its nose where it's not wanted and doesn't belong. This is crazy to me. As a parent I would be livid.
Good story overall I kept my attention well.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, I?m pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Daylily
Your portrayal of the press is very accurate for a lot of them. I cannot imagine why anybody would want to have a job like that. I just do not understand the appeal it evidently holds for certain people.
This is another well written chapter, Jacob, and advances the story.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Your portrayal of the press is very accurate for a lot of them. I cannot imagine why anybody would want to have a job like that. I just do not understand the appeal it evidently holds for certain people.
This is another well written chapter, Jacob, and advances the story.
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
At one time I wanted to be a journalist because they were a righteous lot; now they are the enemy of the people and this chapter is totally believable. Him discovering her relationship with Lucy would be devastating.
A good chapter, Jacob. Dialogue was very realistic.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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At one time I wanted to be a journalist because they were a righteous lot; now they are the enemy of the people and this chapter is totally believable. Him discovering her relationship with Lucy would be devastating.
A good chapter, Jacob. Dialogue was very realistic.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you, Pam. I?m pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from tfawcus
I thought this exchange between Stacey and the journalist particularly realistic. Good, tight dialogue and a range of emotional responses to the situation.
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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I thought this exchange between Stacey and the journalist particularly realistic. Good, tight dialogue and a range of emotional responses to the situation.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you for the six stars Tony, I?m really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Just as Stacey starts to believe, she's slapped down by this reporter who's definitely been doing his research. But why? They don't normally stalk offender's relatives after a sentence. I'm wondering if he's been paid by the real perpetrator to intimidate? But an excellent chapter, Jacob, with your usually fine descriptive detail (the lack of slippers, the chill etc).
Small edit: a man with blonde hair (draws) himself...
Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Just as Stacey starts to believe, she's slapped down by this reporter who's definitely been doing his research. But why? They don't normally stalk offender's relatives after a sentence. I'm wondering if he's been paid by the real perpetrator to intimidate? But an excellent chapter, Jacob, with your usually fine descriptive detail (the lack of slippers, the chill etc).
Small edit: a man with blonde hair (draws) himself...
Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I?m really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
One doesn't need to be guilty for the rumour mongers to get their wicked little minds and tongues working, and coaxing others to join them. Papers and sellers of copy are delighted to condemn no matter what. This is beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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One doesn't need to be guilty for the rumour mongers to get their wicked little minds and tongues working, and coaxing others to join them. Papers and sellers of copy are delighted to condemn no matter what. This is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you Roy, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
Wow, I can so identify with the anger and the sense of being violated where it most hurt. Again, Jacob, you write this so very well. I'm thereand I feel hurt as well. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Wow, I can so identify with the anger and the sense of being violated where it most hurt. Again, Jacob, you write this so very well. I'm thereand I feel hurt as well. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you Ulla, I?m really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
The press is bad to have on your case. They won't let us and it doesn't bother them to insult you and get you angry enough to say things they can pring. The is guy is a nasty. How horrible to know you son is in prison for murdering someone. I hope is innocent but I don't know than yet.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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The press is bad to have on your case. They won't let us and it doesn't bother them to insult you and get you angry enough to say things they can pring. The is guy is a nasty. How horrible to know you son is in prison for murdering someone. I hope is innocent but I don't know than yet.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Media personnel are definitely a pain and in today's world rarely get the stories correct. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading and couldn't find any way to improve it.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Media personnel are definitely a pain and in today's world rarely get the stories correct. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading and couldn't find any way to improve it.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you Barbara, I'm pleased that you liked it.