Comment from Sallyo

Exceptional

Roger the Bodger reigns supreme! Your formatting could use some attention, but I give sixes for stories that strike me as being entertaining and "real stories" rather than drafts. Hats off to you and don't crack your elbow on the table.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024

Wonderful, Sally. So kind. I really had fun writing it.

Comment from cupa tea

Good

what does the story have to do with the song. There isn't anything in the song about fixing things. I guess I just don't understand where you're coming from.

 Comment Written 29-May-2024

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reply by the author on 30-May-2024

I reckoned both the song and the story were about being lucky.
Sorry you didn?t see it that way.

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

This is a unique and engaging story for sure. It pulls the reader in and keeps you interested all the way through. This is a strong entry. Goodluck!!!

 Comment Written 29-May-2024

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reply by the author on 30-May-2024

Many thanks, Nicole.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

An exciting and clever story about a man who is a bit of a fixer upper, whose luck and fixing up helped save his life. Guess things do tend to work out in the end!!

Who is lovely Kylie? That's the name of my granddaughter, lol. You don't hear it often,

Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 29-May-2024

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reply by the author on 29-May-2024

Thank you so much. Kylie Minogue had the big hit with "I should be so lucky". I?m told it means "boomerang" in one of the Australian Aboriginal languages.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 30-May-2024

Oh cool. Thanks for sharing!

reply by the author on 30-May-2024

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