I Might Be
a Delusionary, Illusionary, or Visionary Man26 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Tom,
I like the internal rhyme, metaphor, wit and alliteration in this short
piece on your thought process. I think we are all a mix of all three of those. With out a little bit of each we couldn't be as creative as we
are.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful and creative weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Hi Tom,
I like the internal rhyme, metaphor, wit and alliteration in this short
piece on your thought process. I think we are all a mix of all three of those. With out a little bit of each we couldn't be as creative as we
are.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful and creative weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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da-da. YOu helped me reach BEST OF status with your review. Thanks.
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My pleasure, Tom.
Congrats on earning the BEST Of status.
Joan
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My pleasure, Tom.
Congrats on earning the BEST Of status.
Joan
Comment from Ricky1024
Quite couldn't as wouldn't shouldn't nobody better understands myself but nobody ever understands my work either?
Yes? which is the way I want it.
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Complete Synopsis:
Thr Adjective and Objective Comtents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this Tom and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Doctor
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Quite couldn't as wouldn't shouldn't nobody better understands myself but nobody ever understands my work either?
Yes? which is the way I want it.
...
Complete Synopsis:
Thr Adjective and Objective Comtents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this Tom and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Doctor
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thanks for revisiting, if you are, who you were previously... on a motorcycle??? Who knows? You should. If you aren't who I recall than don't get upset. No ill intent intended, as I still enjoyed your read and comment.
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Baby Blue Kawasaki 2000 CC Vulcan.
I imagine the top speed of the machine was probably close to two hundred.
But I only unlocked it at his throttle.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That explains zip. You are confounding in your vast array of words and thoughts. I tippy-toe through your grand quagmire, looking for the good parts, astounded to discover that together they were all the good parts.
Art is messy sometimes. I enjoy your work. I think if someone poked inside my brain to see how it all worked they would passout from shock. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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That explains zip. You are confounding in your vast array of words and thoughts. I tippy-toe through your grand quagmire, looking for the good parts, astounded to discover that together they were all the good parts.
Art is messy sometimes. I enjoy your work. I think if someone poked inside my brain to see how it all worked they would passout from shock. Karen
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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I concur as a judge with an A.D.A. in a criminal case that you, indeed, may be guilty of my liking my disturbed mind... and its appreciated.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
Delusion -a false belief not based on reality o symptomizing mental disorder; (or??)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
Delusion -a false belief not based on reality o symptomizing mental disorder; (or??)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thanks for finding the mistake on OR. Three more reviews and a Best of might mosey along. Thanks for your read and critique.
Comment from Sally Law
I apologize for no six is mine to offer you, for this is truly brilliant. The alliteration in p is most noteworthy: pensively perverse ponderings pontificating to an audience....
The photo collage is precious of your unique, blessed life. Virtual six and my best wishes for the contest too!
Sal :))
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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I apologize for no six is mine to offer you, for this is truly brilliant. The alliteration in p is most noteworthy: pensively perverse ponderings pontificating to an audience....
The photo collage is precious of your unique, blessed life. Virtual six and my best wishes for the contest too!
Sal :))
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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2b appreciated is 4ever nice but nice is what you always do and there4 u r a fave of mine
Thank u
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2b appreciated is 4ever nice but nice is what you always do and there4 u r a fave of mine
Thank u
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Tom,
I really like your poem.
Your words have nice, flowing rhyme and rhythm, and your sentiment is great.
Nice photos.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Tom,
I really like your poem.
Your words have nice, flowing rhyme and rhythm, and your sentiment is great.
Nice photos.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the great review. I liked it, too, just as I like you. Be well.
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Thanks for the great review. I liked it, too, just as I like you. Be well.
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Thanks for the great review. I liked it, too, just as I like you. Be well.
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Thanks for the great review. I liked it, too, just as I like you. Be well.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I absolutely love the wording in this.
"conjointly joined, to be
one delusive, illusive, visionary man."
This was pretty darn awesome. Way to go and best of luck moving forward.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I absolutely love the wording in this.
"conjointly joined, to be
one delusive, illusive, visionary man."
This was pretty darn awesome. Way to go and best of luck moving forward.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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First, my thanks for stopping by. Second for taking the time to reply and leave a comment. I am glad you enjoyed your visit, and hope you'll revisit again.
Comment from Jim Wile
Well, that's a good start, but from my point of view, I would have to add quixotic, impenetrable, and bizarre. But however we may categorize you, you're always entertaining, jocular, good-natured, and self-deprecating. A unique set of qualities for a rather unique individual.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Well, that's a good start, but from my point of view, I would have to add quixotic, impenetrable, and bizarre. But however we may categorize you, you're always entertaining, jocular, good-natured, and self-deprecating. A unique set of qualities for a rather unique individual.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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U n i q u e is a town in Alaska no? If so, I should go to visit. If not, they should name one such. As a fanstorian you know so many of them that are like me, self-deprecating s.o.b.'s, right?
Thanks.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Tom,
I'm going to assume that's not you sitting butt naked on the stone in the garden, please tell me it's not you. What wondrous beings we are. Not one of us is simple, but we're all a complex mess of emotions, thoughts and whatever else makes up a human being. I'm glad to see that I'm in good company.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Hello Tom,
I'm going to assume that's not you sitting butt naked on the stone in the garden, please tell me it's not you. What wondrous beings we are. Not one of us is simple, but we're all a complex mess of emotions, thoughts and whatever else makes up a human being. I'm glad to see that I'm in good company.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I think the nudist is David and I photographed it in Paris
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are all unique in this world, with our own thoughts and journey in life and the key is to make the most of it and stay positive. I enjoyed your presentation Tom about how you feel about yourself, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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We are all unique in this world, with our own thoughts and journey in life and the key is to make the most of it and stay positive. I enjoyed your presentation Tom about how you feel about yourself, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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That is how I felt last week but today I feel vulnerable.
Tomorrow I might feel invincible
I never know who will appear from the inner workings of my mind