The Sidekick
A modern juvenile Ohmie storie16 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I love the wording in this entry. All the characters bring back so many memories for me!!! Great job, I can see them all flash through my mind right now!
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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I love the wording in this entry. All the characters bring back so many memories for me!!! Great job, I can see them all flash through my mind right now!
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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smiley face here
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another fun chapter with those famous characters, Ohmie and Blado. I think they could have gone on forever with their sidekick game had mother not intervened. And, yes, you have dated yourself, Wayne:)) Or I simply haven't lived!! Then their adventure outside and Blado coming to Ohmie's rescue which is a very gratifying moment for both boys. As ever, you spin a wonderful tale with characters vividly emerging through credible dialogue within a well-structured story. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Another fun chapter with those famous characters, Ohmie and Blado. I think they could have gone on forever with their sidekick game had mother not intervened. And, yes, you have dated yourself, Wayne:)) Or I simply haven't lived!! Then their adventure outside and Blado coming to Ohmie's rescue which is a very gratifying moment for both boys. As ever, you spin a wonderful tale with characters vividly emerging through credible dialogue within a well-structured story. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you ever so much for your very uplifting review.
Comment from BethShelby
I always enjoy you Omni stories. These are a lot of sidekick to the main character in this story but someone who prevents a deadly snake attack deserves to be the Hero rather than the sidekick.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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I always enjoy you Omni stories. These are a lot of sidekick to the main character in this story but someone who prevents a deadly snake attack deserves to be the Hero rather than the sidekick.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Blado does indeed!
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this exchange about heroes and sidekicks. I absolutely loved the end when Blado proved himself to be a hero after all. Keep up the good work! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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I enjoyed this exchange about heroes and sidekicks. I absolutely loved the end when Blado proved himself to be a hero after all. Keep up the good work! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you for your great uplifting review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You have dated yourself. LOL. And for us who can remember all of the characters you spoke of, you've certainly caused them to be dated too. So, with that said, I don't think I remember any of them. :-) Okay, so I'm lying. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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You have dated yourself. LOL. And for us who can remember all of the characters you spoke of, you've certainly caused them to be dated too. So, with that said, I don't think I remember any of them. :-) Okay, so I'm lying. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thanks for your great review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This was like a trivia contest, and you had to be about 80 years old to know ALL the characters named here, lol!
Blado is the hero, indeed. This had a nice ending, Wayne, that tied everything together. Ohmie lives again!
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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This was like a trivia contest, and you had to be about 80 years old to know ALL the characters named here, lol!
Blado is the hero, indeed. This had a nice ending, Wayne, that tied everything together. Ohmie lives again!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Yay!
Thank you for your great review. And immensely for the six stars!
I considered researching modern cartoons and TV/movie duos, but then, well... I didn't.
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Well, it was something for us "oldsters" to ponder:-)
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful way to discover one can be, even thought one is inclined to self cast, probably by environmental influence, but we never really know what we can unless by emergent opportunity, no hero ever thought he was one, that why they come from common people, the only one who knows is God, well done, Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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What a wonderful way to discover one can be, even thought one is inclined to self cast, probably by environmental influence, but we never really know what we can unless by emergent opportunity, no hero ever thought he was one, that why they come from common people, the only one who knows is God, well done, Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review.
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Welcome
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. I don't know all of the ones mentioned, but it was a clever way for engaging readers,a dn inviting them to recall those simpler days. Bravo to Blado saving Ohmie from the venomous snake! A fine ending.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Well done. I don't know all of the ones mentioned, but it was a clever way for engaging readers,a dn inviting them to recall those simpler days. Bravo to Blado saving Ohmie from the venomous snake! A fine ending.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you. I wondered how much reach Bulwinkle or Quickdraw McGraw had.
I appreciate your review.
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I knew the latter but not the former.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You played to your audience on this one. Most of the old guard is rather up there in years. There are not nearly enough young ones. Very amusing and a few I didn't know. Partners makes more sense when Blado is such a hero.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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You played to your audience on this one. Most of the old guard is rather up there in years. There are not nearly enough young ones. Very amusing and a few I didn't know. Partners makes more sense when Blado is such a hero.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
You are right. I started to research modern cartoons and duo teams, but considering the audience...
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Blado! I like how Ohmie wanted Blado to view himself as his equal and then you took us down Memory Lane with all the shows and books with heroes and "sidekicks". Wish every kid had that kind of friendship and were well read - beyond the cartoons. Lol.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Hooray for Blado! I like how Ohmie wanted Blado to view himself as his equal and then you took us down Memory Lane with all the shows and books with heroes and "sidekicks". Wish every kid had that kind of friendship and were well read - beyond the cartoons. Lol.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you.
Yes, you nailed it, we write about a fantasy world sometimes.