Gary Had A Little Ham
Pie in the sky!3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww that's the sort of ending I like! This is fun and I fell in love with the little ham too. So I don't blame Gary. Your entertaining rhyming verse is fluent and, basically, a great story, incorporating dialogue too! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Aww that's the sort of ending I like! This is fun and I fell in love with the little ham too. So I don't blame Gary. Your entertaining rhyming verse is fluent and, basically, a great story, incorporating dialogue too! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you, Debbie :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Gary Had a Little Ham, finds that his little piggy, which was raised as a cannibal, managed to win over his owner and live out his life on the hoof.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This poem, Gary Had a Little Ham, finds that his little piggy, which was raised as a cannibal, managed to win over his owner and live out his life on the hoof.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you, Bill :)
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem made me smile when I read it! It is a great entry for the Mother Goose writing prompt! It has the familiar rhyme, so I can tell what the original nursery rhyme was. Nice one!
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This poem made me smile when I read it! It is a great entry for the Mother Goose writing prompt! It has the familiar rhyme, so I can tell what the original nursery rhyme was. Nice one!
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you, Jodi.