The Department Comes First
The actions of two officers. Disgrace the department.3 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A good story, and a comprehensive write about these different Police Officers and the way they do their very important jobs. One with respect for the law and justice the other two officers, not so. We can only hope cops like them do get found out. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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A good story, and a comprehensive write about these different Police Officers and the way they do their very important jobs. One with respect for the law and justice the other two officers, not so. We can only hope cops like them do get found out. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you for the review. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! And congrats on your 50th post. Your writing does a great job of showing us the complexities of police work. I like how you show the unwavering commitment to integrity required in investigations. The dedication to uncovering the truth was nice to read. The interrogation scene was very engaging. Great job!
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Nicely done! And congrats on your 50th post. Your writing does a great job of showing us the complexities of police work. I like how you show the unwavering commitment to integrity required in investigations. The dedication to uncovering the truth was nice to read. The interrogation scene was very engaging. Great job!
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you for those kind words. It is appreciated!!
Comment from Gunner Lil
A well written short story about a stern and proud police officer. There are a few type errors and misplaced quotation marks. A quick scan will find them.
However, I do not know how this story fits in as "Your under arrest." This seemed to be an internal investigation.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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A well written short story about a stern and proud police officer. There are a few type errors and misplaced quotation marks. A quick scan will find them.
However, I do not know how this story fits in as "Your under arrest." This seemed to be an internal investigation.
Good luck.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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You are absolutely correct. I can only attribute my error to a senior moment.
I really appreciate your review!