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The Wizard

A short rhyming poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sallyo
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So, now he has a new pet! Maybe he should have turned him into a bat instead. The abab rhyme bounces along and yes...it's short! If not for the allergy some publishers have to wizards, this could make the basis for a picture book.

 Comment Written 28-May-2024


reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
    With kind regards
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is a good poem for the challenge. It has good rhyming and is presented nicely. I enjoyed reviewing it. Thank your for sharing it. Best wishes. Alex

 Comment Written 28-May-2024


reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Glad you enjoyed it.
    With kind regards