Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I enjoyed the imagery of this nonet as your tumbleweed represents the lost soul. And as the verse evolves, so the image seems to evaporate, forever gone. Thank you for sharing. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

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reply by the author on 28-May-2024

Debbie,

Thank you for your excellent review. It took 4 revisions and 3 edits to create this Nonet which is far from the original draft.

All the best,

Eugene

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 28-May-2024

Be careful about signing your name as this is blind.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

It has been a while since I read some of yours, and I wondered where you had gone to only to find it was me that left and not you as I see your portfolio has remained constant in posts.

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, Tumbleweeds, has the proper formatting and seem to be directionless and lost, sent onward by the passing winds which take all things not rooted to the horizon.

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem does a wonderful job of painting a picture picture of a soul adrift. The imagery of the directionless vagabond and the meandering tumbleweed together show the aimlessness of the journey. I thought that was so creative! I thought this was beautifully written. Great job!

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

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reply by the author on 28-May-2024

Michael,

Thank you for your excellent review. I appreciate and value your comments.

All the best,

Eugene

Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson

Excellent

The way you describe the tumbleweed is perfect! I love your personification, and it has a nice flow too. It has the right syllable count for this nonet. Nice job!

 Comment Written 28-May-2024

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reply by the author on 28-May-2024

Jodi,

Thank you for your excellent review. I truly value and appreciate your comments.

All the best,

Eugene