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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written poem, and I enjoyed listening to it however, it moves with me sad part in my own life because I had a mother who was much the same as described in this poem. Patricia .

 Comment Written 27-May-2024


reply by the author on 27-May-2024
    Thank you for your review, Patricia. And I'm so sorry to hear your mom was similar. I hope you are with good people now, in your life. My good friends have been the balm of my life.
Comment from lyenochka
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What is a "Mater" ? Latin for mother? From the poem, no tomato was referenced.
I like how you alluded to 1 Corinthians 13 and showed us how this person was the total opposite of Love. The complete personification of Love is Jesus. So glad that you conclude that God has your back and put any harm this person has done behind you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024


reply by the author on 27-May-2024
    LOL! Yeah, not a tow truck in "Cars." It's definitely Latin. Thanks for your review, lyenochka.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi, Aiona. I hope you are well. That is so true! God's got your back always. I am new to christianity and the Lord. I had a near death experience in September. Actually I did die a few times I had multiple cardiac arrests. Luckily I got care so promptly that I did not even have organ damage. That is how I came to decide to make Jesus my Lord and I already feel much more peaceful. My health is really bad and I may die at any time but it's up to the Lord when he's gonna take me Suicide is the ultimate sin because it takes God's control away from him. I'm guessing murder comes from HIM. HE MUST WANT THE SOULS THAT ARE MURDERED. S8me murder victims are bad. So do they go to heaven? I think Satn takes their souls.

Well done. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024


reply by the author on 27-May-2024
    Thank you for your review, Pamusart. I am glad you're doing alright now. But yeah, nothing is guaranteed, is it? :) Every day has potential.