Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Chapter 12 B"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
30 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another good chapter, Barbara, I think are two lovebirds are getting closer to admiting their true feelings to each other. All this hedgeing around must be so frustrating for both of them. I also fancy some of that cobler and ice-cream! I don't know if it's a spelling mistake, I've never heard an uncover agent. Well done again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
who knows our un(der)cover agents'
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Another good chapter, Barbara, I think are two lovebirds are getting closer to admiting their true feelings to each other. All this hedgeing around must be so frustrating for both of them. I also fancy some of that cobler and ice-cream! I don't know if it's a spelling mistake, I've never heard an uncover agent. Well done again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
who knows our un(der)cover agents'
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Cobbler and homemade ice cream is perfect. My son made some while we were visiting. He's a Chef. Thank you for the time it took to read this.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
When I read your stories ( and I mean this in a GOOD way), I feel that it went by too fast. There are no unclear paragraphs. No heavy handed explanations. I will be sad when this ends. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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When I read your stories ( and I mean this in a GOOD way), I feel that it went by too fast. There are no unclear paragraphs. No heavy handed explanations. I will be sad when this ends. Karen
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. It's always interesting to read your reviews.
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
aw... so sweet, I am happy Noah can express his feelings to Sami. It seems he is the kind of man who is not comfortable doing it.
Well done, Barbara, I always enjoy your stories.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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aw... so sweet, I am happy Noah can express his feelings to Sami. It seems he is the kind of man who is not comfortable doing it.
Well done, Barbara, I always enjoy your stories.
Gypsy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Noah is afraid to express feelings.
Comment from Daylily
So sorry there are no sixes left. I am far behind in reviewing and there is so little time available. As customary, you have written another excellent chapter with everything continues to be weaving together so well. I am always glad to find a new posting. Smiles, Lily
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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So sorry there are no sixes left. I am far behind in reviewing and there is so little time available. As customary, you have written another excellent chapter with everything continues to be weaving together so well. I am always glad to find a new posting. Smiles, Lily
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you for reading and this kind review. I hope you read before the monies expired.
Comment from tfawcus
Your dialogue is always good, but this time it is particularly finely nuanced to keep the pent-up feelings simmering. It may be a short one, but the emotional tension is great.
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Your dialogue is always good, but this time it is particularly finely nuanced to keep the pent-up feelings simmering. It may be a short one, but the emotional tension is great.
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you for the enouragement.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I enjoyed this post. I really got a kick out of the conversation between Noah and Sami, when she said "this is you relaxed?" Spoke volumes about his usual demeanor. I like that their conversations are more free flowing now. Each getting more relaxed with the other. Great post. Glad you are enjoying family time, though. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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I enjoyed this post. I really got a kick out of the conversation between Noah and Sami, when she said "this is you relaxed?" Spoke volumes about his usual demeanor. I like that their conversations are more free flowing now. Each getting more relaxed with the other. Great post. Glad you are enjoying family time, though. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
I could feel a little bit of tension between Sami and Noah, particularly when Sami says she's started to feel too comfortable around him. It's clear to see that Noah is keen for there to be something between them but it might take longer for Sami to come round to this idea. An entertaining chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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I could feel a little bit of tension between Sami and Noah, particularly when Sami says she's started to feel too comfortable around him. It's clear to see that Noah is keen for there to be something between them but it might take longer for Sami to come round to this idea. An entertaining chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I think it may be more difficult for Noah than Sami with this relationship. LOL
Comment from Sankey
This was a lovely read. So much going on for me, I have fallen a bit behind. Trying to update an ancient Youtube of a final ride on a train that has discontinued. You would have seen my video of the trams(Light Rail ) that has replaced the train. One possible change. I did go to away (for, to or on)ball games.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This was a lovely read. So much going on for me, I have fallen a bit behind. Trying to update an ancient Youtube of a final ride on a train that has discontinued. You would have seen my video of the trams(Light Rail ) that has replaced the train. One possible change. I did go to away (for, to or on)ball games.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Barbara, I have been away to Denmark, visiting my family there. It was great to seeing my three young granddaughters. I had absolutely no time to be on FS. So I'm catching up. Your story is progressing and I like it. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Hi, Barbara, I have been away to Denmark, visiting my family there. It was great to seeing my three young granddaughters. I had absolutely no time to be on FS. So I'm catching up. Your story is progressing and I like it. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, for those like me, any day that ends or begins with apple cobbler and ice cream is a good day or night. As a matter of fact, now that you've brought it up, I just might have to have a little of one or both. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Well, for those like me, any day that ends or begins with apple cobbler and ice cream is a good day or night. As a matter of fact, now that you've brought it up, I just might have to have a little of one or both. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. LOL I agree. My son made homemade ice cream while we visited.