Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Harry,
This is a well written poem that fits the contest well. Only a f love could r this easy.
Good luck with the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the week
Joan

 Comment Written 29-May-2024

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reply by the author on 30-May-2024

Thanks for the read and the feedback. Will try to keep writing and stay healthy.

reply by dragonpoet on 30-May-2024

No problem Harry.
Joan

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!

Very nice that it ends in a wedding. I enjoyed it.

Wizards are, well wizards.

Here, I would change saw to seeing. Just sounds grammatically incorrect the way it is

" A kindly wizard seeing a young man weep"

Here I believe wizard should be possessive wizard's

" The young suitor sang the wizard loving spell"

Here I believe it should be swooned

" His lady's heart swoon, said she was mistaken"

Like this

His lady's heart swooned, said she was mistaken


Nice job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

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reply by the author on 27-May-2024

Thanks for the read and catching the mistakes. I have edited.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Very good rhyming and and interesting story. I enjoyed reviewing this poem and the image that matched well. Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes.

Alex

 Comment Written 26-May-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thank for taking your time to read and review. So pleased you enjoy the write.