Five Seven Five
A 5-7-5. poem3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like your eye-catching image and the way you reflect the scene in your 5-7-5 verse. It's an imaginative take on the way these prompts can infiltrate the brain and become more than a bit obsessional. Small edit with the extra 'thing' in your notes. Nicely done! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I like your eye-catching image and the way you reflect the scene in your 5-7-5 verse. It's an imaginative take on the way these prompts can infiltrate the brain and become more than a bit obsessional. Small edit with the extra 'thing' in your notes. Nicely done! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for catching that. I didn't notice. I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This poem pretty much sums up the way my muse feels everytime a 5-7-5 writing prompt shows up! I love writing them but sometimes getting an idea is just overwhelming. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This poem pretty much sums up the way my muse feels everytime a 5-7-5 writing prompt shows up! I love writing them but sometimes getting an idea is just overwhelming. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you. I'll need it. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I know exactly what you mean! I used to write lots of haikus, senkus and tankas. That was five to six years ago. Now I write in iambic tetrameter all the time and even think that way in my mind. It helps when I write.
Your 5-7-5 is definitely humorous. It is a senku in case you were wondering.
In Haiku, senku and tanka there is no rhyming allowed and very little punctuation.
I enjoyed your poem very much.
Great job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.!
I know exactly what you mean! I used to write lots of haikus, senkus and tankas. That was five to six years ago. Now I write in iambic tetrameter all the time and even think that way in my mind. It helps when I write.
Your 5-7-5 is definitely humorous. It is a senku in case you were wondering.
In Haiku, senku and tanka there is no rhyming allowed and very little punctuation.
I enjoyed your poem very much.
Great job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you, I wasn't quite sure of its exact classification. Thank you for the info and all of your comments.
