Yellowstone
Diamond Geyser.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku does a wonderful job of sharing the beauty of nature. The imagery of wolves baying at the Hunter's moon, combined with the pulsing of Old Faithful for me shows the untamed beauty of the natural world. I thought your poem was wonderfully creative especially within the limitations of this poetry type.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Your haiku does a wonderful job of sharing the beauty of nature. The imagery of wolves baying at the Hunter's moon, combined with the pulsing of Old Faithful for me shows the untamed beauty of the natural world. I thought your poem was wonderfully creative especially within the limitations of this poetry type.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Very kind, Michael. Much appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Yellowstone, has the proper formatting and includes the big, shiny moon, baying wolves, and the uniquely beautiful and timely emissions from the Diamond Geyser.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This 5-7-5, Yellowstone, has the proper formatting and includes the big, shiny moon, baying wolves, and the uniquely beautiful and timely emissions from the Diamond Geyser.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Many thanks, Bill.