Birth of Plastic
A Doomsday Scenario2 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever and original, and unfortunately based on the reality oof the damage that microplastics are causing. Your story is imaginative and well written. best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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Very clever and original, and unfortunately based on the reality oof the damage that microplastics are causing. Your story is imaginative and well written. best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-May-2024
Comment from lancellot
Well, it is a doomsday scenario alright, and one with a cause people today can relate to. Now, the stories focus is good. It does narrate a lot to catch the reader up to speed, instead of showing things, but you have a limited word count. The main issue I see is in paragraph structure, that is bad, and needs editing.
Good luck in the contest.
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Well, it is a doomsday scenario alright, and one with a cause people today can relate to. Now, the stories focus is good. It does narrate a lot to catch the reader up to speed, instead of showing things, but you have a limited word count. The main issue I see is in paragraph structure, that is bad, and needs editing.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2024