The Light In The Harbor
Historical Narrative2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!
At least, the passengers were not on board. But, the crew probably was.
This was my favorite part
" To the teeming shores of America
To breathe the air of chosen promises
Where the sun rises on its golden shore"
Air of chosen promises is a nice touch.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!
At least, the passengers were not on board. But, the crew probably was.
This was my favorite part
" To the teeming shores of America
To breathe the air of chosen promises
Where the sun rises on its golden shore"
Air of chosen promises is a nice touch.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
Comment from artisart4u
Your historical narrative was interesting to read and I am sorry about the ending. When I pulled up "Glen Lee", I notice it is spelled "Glenlee." Is that just American way of writing Glen Lee? As we
say, "so near and yet so far."
Good luck with your historical narrative.
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Your historical narrative was interesting to read and I am sorry about the ending. When I pulled up "Glen Lee", I notice it is spelled "Glenlee." Is that just American way of writing Glen Lee? As we
say, "so near and yet so far."
Good luck with your historical narrative.
Comment Written 25-May-2024