I didn't really want him dead...
A story of how I got revenge on my father2 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
Well, as a guy who spent a week on a ventilator, I don't want you anywhere near me. Driven to it, I think most people could do something of this nature. It would be a long drive for me though. I have Bambi license plates. Not really, Disney would charge an arm and a leg for them. You should maybe separate your text a little. Too bunchy. I like the darkness of it.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Well, as a guy who spent a week on a ventilator, I don't want you anywhere near me. Driven to it, I think most people could do something of this nature. It would be a long drive for me though. I have Bambi license plates. Not really, Disney would charge an arm and a leg for them. You should maybe separate your text a little. Too bunchy. I like the darkness of it.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I'll have to reread that. Thank you for the great review and honest advice
Comment from Bill Schott
Wow! The maliciousness rises as the narrator moves through what was a terrible covid tale to one of ultimate payback. One must consider either the father was evil in an over-the-top way, where we would all consider his death a victory, or his failings as a father in the regular ways have festered until this accidental infection is seen as a pre-planned attempt to kill him.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Wow! The maliciousness rises as the narrator moves through what was a terrible covid tale to one of ultimate payback. One must consider either the father was evil in an over-the-top way, where we would all consider his death a victory, or his failings as a father in the regular ways have festered until this accidental infection is seen as a pre-planned attempt to kill him.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I'm glad you view it that way. It was meant to have that feel
