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J's Bum

Internal monologue of a slightly perverted mind of a man

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Comment from Jill D
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This is an amusing read... 'From behind you have no superior' what a great line Lol...a funny poem.. You crack me up;)
All the best with this!
Jill:)

 Comment Written 26-May-2024

Comment from Nicki.B
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I find this poem amusing and enjoyable. I never thought I'd be sitting reading a poem all about butts! It has humour and cheekiness 'pardon the pun!' Thanks for sharing it put a smile on my face this evening.

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

Comment from Bruce Carrington
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Gives off Bukowski vibes which I adore. Writing about ass in such a beautiful way is something I will have to practice. Flow of the poem is superb. Very nicely done, Stuart.

 Comment Written 24-May-2024