Imaginary Hope
A reimagined history4 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is an interesting read for this 'under arrest' contest in which you show Emmett Till's family getting some justice for the murder of their son but then, David Turner's reality of being an innocent black man languishing in prison and dreaming of justice. Well done and good luck in the contest
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This is an interesting read for this 'under arrest' contest in which you show Emmett Till's family getting some justice for the murder of their son but then, David Turner's reality of being an innocent black man languishing in prison and dreaming of justice. Well done and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-May-2024
Comment from Gunner Lil
A fine written short story with some drama.
Don't understand the tags used for your dialog in this story. Was it to be a screen play?
Good luck thank you for sharing.
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A fine written short story with some drama.
Don't understand the tags used for your dialog in this story. Was it to be a screen play?
Good luck thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. Your post is invaluable to society. I'd like to see it published everywhere.
Emmitt Till was one of the reasons why my husband became a civil rights worker in the summer of 1965. The other reason was the Birmingham bombing. He met Dr. King. King knew he was going to be assasinated. He told my husband that his death would not be in vain. Then he told my husband that should he be killed, his death would not be in vain.
My husband registered black people to vote and desegregated restaurants
I really enjoyed your poem. Even more so because I am familiar with this (you properly called it an) atrocity
Great job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hi. Your post is invaluable to society. I'd like to see it published everywhere.
Emmitt Till was one of the reasons why my husband became a civil rights worker in the summer of 1965. The other reason was the Birmingham bombing. He met Dr. King. King knew he was going to be assasinated. He told my husband that his death would not be in vain. Then he told my husband that should he be killed, his death would not be in vain.
My husband registered black people to vote and desegregated restaurants
I really enjoyed your poem. Even more so because I am familiar with this (you properly called it an) atrocity
Great job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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It is truly an honor to have you read and give a positive review. I always think of these times and wish things could?ve been different. Thank you and your husband for bringing reality to my wishes.
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a well-written story with a creative approach to the prompt, a man dreaming of justice told via interrogation. I'm not personally aware if your dreamer is a real historical figure or not, but he clearly shares in the same cultural and racial milieu as Emmitt Till.
You have a little computer gremlin in this sentence:
lingering in his mind�¢?"a dream where justice wasn't an elusive concept but a tangible reality.
Nice job!
Julie
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This is a well-written story with a creative approach to the prompt, a man dreaming of justice told via interrogation. I'm not personally aware if your dreamer is a real historical figure or not, but he clearly shares in the same cultural and racial milieu as Emmitt Till.
You have a little computer gremlin in this sentence:
lingering in his mind�¢?"a dream where justice wasn't an elusive concept but a tangible reality.
Nice job!
Julie
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank You, I took care of that pesky Gremlin lol.
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Thank You, I took care of that pesky Gremlin lol.
