The Now
Meditation2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Lonna. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.! Exactly 15 syllables.
I like your concept here. I like the idea that we are tethered to our talking and gyrations. And, then we break the tether by just becoming still and silent
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Lonna. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that.! Exactly 15 syllables.
I like your concept here. I like the idea that we are tethered to our talking and gyrations. And, then we break the tether by just becoming still and silent
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
Comment from GoWiSt
Nice complementary picture art choice.
Successfully met the 15-syllable requirement for this poem contest.
Good personification of silence and time in the first and third lines.
An interesting philosophical poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Nice complementary picture art choice.
Successfully met the 15-syllable requirement for this poem contest.
Good personification of silence and time in the first and third lines.
An interesting philosophical poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
