Comment from
jessizero
This poem about your grandmother was sweet and heartbreaking all at once. I am glad she visits you in your dreams, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
Comment from
Julie Helms
This is so touching. A woman who loved truly and with her whole being. The poem sounds as if she is still right there, though the last line gives the twist that she isn't but still visits in dreams. I like the narrators outlook, that he hasn't been abandoned by her passing.
A lovely poem.
Julie
Comment Written 23-May-2024