2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written contemporary haiku poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you used also. Beautiful job my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very well written contemporary haiku poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you used also. Beautiful job my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Comment from kahpot
The minds imagination is a wonderful thing, it would be great if we could build our treehouse on a stump, and watch it grow, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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The minds imagination is a wonderful thing, it would be great if we could build our treehouse on a stump, and watch it grow, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well expressed and presented. I like the three different colors that express each verse. Well done. I can see how the tree stump would take him back to his tree house.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Well expressed and presented. I like the three different colors that express each verse. Well done. I can see how the tree stump would take him back to his tree house.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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Comment from shelley kaye
love that tree stump pic with the weed growing out of the center!
i always wanted a treehouse... ah well lol
this was a great haiku - good imagery and pics
first line: oldman <-- did you mean "old man"? (2 words)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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love that tree stump pic with the weed growing out of the center!
i always wanted a treehouse... ah well lol
this was a great haiku - good imagery and pics
first line: oldman <-- did you mean "old man"? (2 words)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley, I fixed that error.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has great sensory appeal, and I could feel the walk down memory lane of the old man. Tree houses are so much fun. My sons had one, and they had so much fun with it. The tree house is now gone, but the tree is still there. They reminisce when they see it.
Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has great sensory appeal, and I could feel the walk down memory lane of the old man. Tree houses are so much fun. My sons had one, and they had so much fun with it. The tree house is now gone, but the tree is still there. They reminisce when they see it.
Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Margaret 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Aww. That's so sweet! I love how you set up the present day picture of the tree stump and long ago, that old man remembers the treehouse on the tree that used to hold his treasured hideaway.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Aww. That's so sweet! I love how you set up the present day picture of the tree stump and long ago, that old man remembers the treehouse on the tree that used to hold his treasured hideaway.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Yes, that's right. Made me think of the giving tree. I always wanted a tree house.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Today there was an Art walk event at Atticus school. He also performed a couple of songs... he is so cute and an outstanding artist.
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Wow! Sounds like he inherited a lot from you! 💖
Comment from Julie Helms
This haiku is heavy with nostalgia, wistful feelings of a bygone youth. The tree stump proves, time moves on. A poignant moment well expressed.
Julie
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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This haiku is heavy with nostalgia, wistful feelings of a bygone youth. The tree stump proves, time moves on. A poignant moment well expressed.
Julie
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie
Gypsy
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is simple but well written and well presented. We also have a swing set that I mostly look at so I understand the emotion here. I imagine a day I can swing high again. I enjoyed reviewing this!
Love
Alexan :)
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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This is simple but well written and well presented. We also have a swing set that I mostly look at so I understand the emotion here. I imagine a day I can swing high again. I enjoyed reviewing this!
Love
Alexan :)
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Alexan
Gypsy