Copperheads
My one phobia22 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem about a very deadly snake. I have a little story about one of these snakes one day when I was the young teenager my father had gone to the garden, and he saw a snake underneath the bean plants in the garden, the tail was sticking out. He quickly reached down, grab the tail and snapped the head off of the copperhead snake when he saw what it was, he turned his white as a sheet Because he knew what could've happened. Had he been bitten by that snake. Patricia
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This is a very well written poem about a very deadly snake. I have a little story about one of these snakes one day when I was the young teenager my father had gone to the garden, and he saw a snake underneath the bean plants in the garden, the tail was sticking out. He quickly reached down, grab the tail and snapped the head off of the copperhead snake when he saw what it was, he turned his white as a sheet Because he knew what could've happened. Had he been bitten by that snake. Patricia
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from Boogienights
Snakes very much creep me out! I totally know where you're coming from, plus they can cause your death with thier deadly venom. I don't blame you for having that phobia. Well written, best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Snakes very much creep me out! I totally know where you're coming from, plus they can cause your death with thier deadly venom. I don't blame you for having that phobia. Well written, best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you for the good wishes, enjoy the remainder of your long weekend.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Nicely done! I could feel the fear behind this poem! Good imagry! I wouldn't want to run into them either! I like the way this kind of paints a story almost.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Nicely done! I could feel the fear behind this poem! Good imagry! I wouldn't want to run into them either! I like the way this kind of paints a story almost.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Nicole, thank you!
Comment from GWHARGIS
We have rattlers and water moccasins around where I live. The rattlers are new. A few more seen each year. I'm not particularly scared of snakes. Not sure why, but I hate frogs and lizards. Both of them creep me out. Wonderful entry. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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We have rattlers and water moccasins around where I live. The rattlers are new. A few more seen each year. I'm not particularly scared of snakes. Not sure why, but I hate frogs and lizards. Both of them creep me out. Wonderful entry. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Gretchen, thank you. Our rattlesnakes are around. We are heavily forested. At least the rattlesnake most often warn you, Copperheads do nto.
Comment from LJbutterfly
You use of compelling descriptive language provided exceptional imagery to you poem about Copperhead snakes. Snakes are a phobia of many people. Your poem is clear, smooth flowing and enjoyable. Best wishes in the contest.
With no tell-tell rattle to be very wary of (Did you mean tell-tale)?
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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You use of compelling descriptive language provided exceptional imagery to you poem about Copperhead snakes. Snakes are a phobia of many people. Your poem is clear, smooth flowing and enjoyable. Best wishes in the contest.
With no tell-tell rattle to be very wary of (Did you mean tell-tale)?
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you, yes corrected, ugh!
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, that is a very reasonable phobia. Poisonous snakes are no joke, and there is so little time to get life-saving anti venom. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Yes, that is a very reasonable phobia. Poisonous snakes are no joke, and there is so little time to get life-saving anti venom. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hi Wendy, thank you. I trust all is well down-under... Jim
Comment from royowen
Ah it is an Australian snake, which are reputed to have seven out of the top ten most venomous snakes in the world, however there aren't terribly many victims, well done, great post my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Ah it is an Australian snake, which are reputed to have seven out of the top ten most venomous snakes in the world, however there aren't terribly many victims, well done, great post my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thanks you sir!
Comment from jmdg1954
Hello author.
Well I'm not a snake guy, meaning if I go through the day, the week, the month or the year without seeing a snake, I'm ecstatic. Let's go one step further and my life without seeing one.
With that being said, you poem is well written within the guidelines of the contest rules.
Cheers, or do we say hissssssssssss...
John
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Hello author.
Well I'm not a snake guy, meaning if I go through the day, the week, the month or the year without seeing a snake, I'm ecstatic. Let's go one step further and my life without seeing one.
With that being said, you poem is well written within the guidelines of the contest rules.
Cheers, or do we say hissssssssssss...
John
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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John, I am in lockstep with you, sir!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Snakes ready spook me out and yet there are so many people that enjoy having them as pets.
They can hide so well in the dead vegetation. Most bites are caused because someone brushes passed with their feet or hand.
We have vipers in my country and they take a winter nap.
When I go walking in my woods I always take a stick and wear my boots. and I pray.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Ciao!
Snakes ready spook me out and yet there are so many people that enjoy having them as pets.
They can hide so well in the dead vegetation. Most bites are caused because someone brushes passed with their feet or hand.
We have vipers in my country and they take a winter nap.
When I go walking in my woods I always take a stick and wear my boots. and I pray.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Ciao, Tempeste, We have hiberation periods our high risk is follwing heavy rains. I too use a big stick when in the brush and thickets.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I don't like snakes either. We had 4 black snakes at our house. Your poem was descriptive and well written. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I don't like snakes either. We had 4 black snakes at our house. Your poem was descriptive and well written. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you Brenda, I saw an 8' black snake hust yesterday, I really let them trtail through because they do eat the copperhead eggs.
