Worship
A short poem about worship3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
It's always difficult for me to review such a short work, especially since I have been under the weather a little. I hope you do well in the contest. There is nothing wrong with your words; I just didn't understand the placement of the piano in the illo.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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It's always difficult for me to review such a short work, especially since I have been under the weather a little. I hope you do well in the contest. There is nothing wrong with your words; I just didn't understand the placement of the piano in the illo.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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illo? Thanks
Comment from jessizero
I really enjoyed this poem for the 2-4-2 poetry contest. You got the syllable counts right, and I liked your statement. I think you did a great job. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I really enjoyed this poem for the 2-4-2 poetry contest. You got the syllable counts right, and I liked your statement. I think you did a great job. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from Sally Law
First, welcome to FanStory, Erika! I'm delighted to read you today. This is beautiful, simple, sweet and sacred. A sure contender in a very difficult form of poetry. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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First, welcome to FanStory, Erika! I'm delighted to read you today. This is beautiful, simple, sweet and sacred. A sure contender in a very difficult form of poetry. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you!