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Clumsy Fish

A short silly rhyming poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from JanPerry
Good
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I'm glad his bow tie stayed dry, but why was it dry if he went into water? Something deeper to ponder. It is simple and sweet not ground breaking though.

 Comment Written 21-May-2024

reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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Okay, yes, you have accomplished your goal. This is SILLY. You share a funny picture of this bow tie fish. The playful tone and imagery of the fish attending a party in Mumbai was so silly it was funny!

 Comment Written 21-May-2024

reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
    With kind regards