Dumbledee
Children's Fantasy2 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
You have gone all out in this poem. I can just see kids acting out many of the lines and/or making the sounds of actions or joining in with the teacher as she reads Tweedle Dee Dee. Well done and imaginative!
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You have gone all out in this poem. I can just see kids acting out many of the lines and/or making the sounds of actions or joining in with the teacher as she reads Tweedle Dee Dee. Well done and imaginative!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from rodea
This is a very Silly and fun Character. Very fun to read a great visual descriptions of the dragon and everything else you describe.
my only suggestion is to shorten it a little. Overall great job.
Thanks for writting a colorful and creative story.
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This is a very Silly and fun Character. Very fun to read a great visual descriptions of the dragon and everything else you describe.
my only suggestion is to shorten it a little. Overall great job.
Thanks for writting a colorful and creative story.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
