A Fortuitous Encounter
An unusual interview11 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is an imaginative short flash fiction story that makes every word move this adult story forward. I especially enjoyed the final statement of the interviewer. "You're hired." Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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This is an imaginative short flash fiction story that makes every word move this adult story forward. I especially enjoyed the final statement of the interviewer. "You're hired." Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Yes indeed, that would be awkward. And doubtless will continue to be, with her the boss. A well written story with a clever closing. Best wishes.
Wendy
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Yes indeed, that would be awkward. And doubtless will continue to be, with her the boss. A well written story with a clever closing. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was quite a shocking ending to a short short story. You did a good job building this up and then ending it like that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was quite a shocking ending to a short short story. You did a good job building this up and then ending it like that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Mia Twysted
This sounds like the beginning of one of those comedy romance movies. Now I am wondering if they will work together and fall in love. How does the rest of the story go?
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This sounds like the beginning of one of those comedy romance movies. Now I am wondering if they will work together and fall in love. How does the rest of the story go?
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, A Fortuitous Encounter, has the proper word count and notes the special skill needed to put the Q&A in the term Qualified Applicant.
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This one-hundred-word story, A Fortuitous Encounter, has the proper word count and notes the special skill needed to put the Q&A in the term Qualified Applicant.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like the way that so much is said in such a brief format. It never seemed rushed and you developed the story clearly with that lovely twist at the end. The image also complemented the write well with that seductive "the night is ours" look! Excellent! Good luck in the contest! Debbie
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I like the way that so much is said in such a brief format. It never seemed rushed and you developed the story clearly with that lovely twist at the end. The image also complemented the write well with that seductive "the night is ours" look! Excellent! Good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Saying it was awkward would be an understatement in my personal opinion. LOL Very intriguing and amusing as well. Great job! Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
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Saying it was awkward would be an understatement in my personal opinion. LOL Very intriguing and amusing as well. Great job! Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
oh claw-dy, are you the miss law-die? What a trying interview that must have been. In today's world sexual advances are frightening; perhaps in your story, they should still be frightening! What a surprise.
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oh claw-dy, are you the miss law-die? What a trying interview that must have been. In today's world sexual advances are frightening; perhaps in your story, they should still be frightening! What a surprise.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, this was a cute story, mystery writer!! You did a great job of telling the whole story in 100 words and relaying meaning. It didn't seem rushed or over edited. Just perfect.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
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Oh my gosh, this was a cute story, mystery writer!! You did a great job of telling the whole story in 100 words and relaying meaning. It didn't seem rushed or over edited. Just perfect.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 21-May-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was a fun read. The encounter with the mysterious woman at the bar adds intrigue and sets the stage ... well for anything. The twist at the end was great! I had no idea that it was an interview. This was a fun and enjoyable read and done so with only 100 words! Congrats!
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This was a fun read. The encounter with the mysterious woman at the bar adds intrigue and sets the stage ... well for anything. The twist at the end was great! I had no idea that it was an interview. This was a fun and enjoyable read and done so with only 100 words! Congrats!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
