The Interloper
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Downfall Chap 4"a family sage told by the ignored one
3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Thank goodness for that! I hope she can go and get all her things, and thank goodness Gunther did one good thing, and that was to have the bank open an account for her. At least she still has her own money. Now what will happen? I hope you get the next chapter out soon! Well done, Joan, this is a terrific story! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank goodness for that! I hope she can go and get all her things, and thank goodness Gunther did one good thing, and that was to have the bank open an account for her. At least she still has her own money. Now what will happen? I hope you get the next chapter out soon! Well done, Joan, this is a terrific story! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I appreciate your continued support. I have what I think are all the chapters written I have just got to but them into the book layout. So all of the chapters are together.
Joan
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Not sure if I have read the previous chapters, but the content on this release is interesting. Is this a true-to-life event or fictitious fiction. My mom was abused but only if dad was drinking. Sad.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Not sure if I have read the previous chapters, but the content on this release is interesting. Is this a true-to-life event or fictitious fiction. My mom was abused but only if dad was drinking. Sad.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Hi Tom, This is totally fictional. Thank God. Sorry to hear about your mother. Any abuse is sad.
Joan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I'm sorry but the way you laid out the sentence structure is very difficult to read. I stopped reading after a few seeming paragraphs that went on about Guntha and then, I lost interest.
Please I suggest that you review your work and edit it to make it easier to read.
Jesse
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I'm sorry but the way you laid out the sentence structure is very difficult to read. I stopped reading after a few seeming paragraphs that went on about Guntha and then, I lost interest.
Please I suggest that you review your work and edit it to make it easier to read.
Jesse
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thanks for the constructive criticism Jesse. Sorry you didn't enjoy it.
Joan
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It's not the subject but the sentence structure that is hard to read.
I'm sure I would enjoy it if it were easier to read.
Jesse
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That's good to know, Jesse.
Joan